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Logo + Business card

Hello, Jason. How are you? Hope you like it!

Contest Entry #7 for                                                 CREATIVE, BEAUTIFUL, STANDOUT BUSINESS CARD WITH LOGO DESIRED

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  • renanbonin
    renanbonin
    • 5 years ago

    Hi, Jason.

    Sorry for not responding. I was in another city doing a master's degree process.

    I made two other versions:

    Entries #101 and #102

    • 5 years ago
  • jasondry
    Contest Holder
    • 5 years ago

    This would be among my favorites if the writing were bold and white, so it was more visible.

    • 5 years ago
  • jasondry
    Contest Holder
    • 5 years ago

    Hi. Could I see this with bold white text, and standing vertically instead of slanted back? Thank you.

    • 5 years ago
  • jasondry
    Contest Holder
    • 5 years ago

    Maybe try the black background with white letters. Could the logline be aligned with a left margin? Also, it needs to actually have the word LOGLINE in all caps.

    • 5 years ago
  • jasondry
    Contest Holder
    • 5 years ago

    I like the simplicity of the design. I would like to see lighter text. This text is really difficult to read. I also cannot see the logo, because it is too dark. However, I can tell that my name is in cursive. I would like something a bit more creative than that. Also, perhaps try the text sets in boxes (white boxes, for example) with dark, bold letters. I don't like that the logline is centered. Everything should pop.

    • 5 years ago

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