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E Khattaba

This is my second entry. A more abstract and simplified version. Thanks

Contest Entry #44 for E-Khattaba Logo

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  • mohammedhaddad88
    mohammedhaddad88
    • 1 year ago

    show time

    • 1 year ago
  • LaCynn
    LaCynn
    • 1 year ago

    NICE!

    • 1 year ago
  • popohouse15
    popohouse15
    • 2 years ago

    very excellent logo

    • 2 years ago
  • pratamafadhil
    pratamafadhil
    • 2 years ago

    Hi, I've uploaded the revised version at entry #80.

    • 2 years ago
  • saraalmudhaf
    Contest Holder
    • 2 years ago

    I like the contrast in face size of the man's and woman's. I like that they are asymmetrical, not identical, and not a reflection.

    • 2 years ago
  • pratamafadhil
    pratamafadhil
    • 2 years ago

    Sure, right away.

    • 2 years ago
  • saraalmudhaf
    Contest Holder
    • 2 years ago

    I like how you filled the gap between the man's chin and woman's nose with a beard. So useful and very well utilized. However, I am not a fan of the negative space under the woman's chin. Would you experiment with that please or just close it up or minimize it. Thanks

    • 2 years ago
  • pratamafadhil
    pratamafadhil
    • 2 years ago

    Thank you four the insight. i will get back to you right away.

    • 2 years ago
  • saraalmudhaf
    Contest Holder
    • 2 years ago

    Try using the same mustache for the woman's lips. Change color and reflect (upside-down). Try slightly bigger eyes for both without eyelash for woman. This is also a characteristic of Arabian eyes. Try again a closed eye for the womanonly, this time with eyelash. I like the idea of the blush for the woman but not so much the execution (the blur). It is not in harmony with the whole style. I like the shadow of the ear and chin.

    • 2 years ago
    1. saraalmudhaf
      Contest Holder
      • 2 years ago

      I believe closed eyes will successfully communicate a forehead kiss and support the current position of the man over the woman. Check entry #47 for reference.

      • 2 years ago
  • saraalmudhaf
    Contest Holder
    • 2 years ago

    I love the color scheme.

    • 2 years ago
  • saraalmudhaf
    Contest Holder
    • 2 years ago

    I'm very happy.

    • 2 years ago
  • saraalmudhaf
    Contest Holder
    • 2 years ago

    Try to experiment with the gold headpiece for the woman. It would add more cultural context. Try to unify all gold stroke thickness including the black headpiece for the man (one thickness). Thank you.

    • 2 years ago
    1. saraalmudhaf
      Contest Holder
      • 2 years ago

      Entries #47 #36

      • 2 years ago
  • saraalmudhaf
    Contest Holder
    • 2 years ago

    I like the digital pattern design. Works very well with e- as in digital or electronic.

    • 2 years ago
  • saraalmudhaf
    Contest Holder
    • 2 years ago

    I can see a heart (right one). I like it.

    • 2 years ago
  • saraalmudhaf
    Contest Holder
    • 2 years ago

    I love it.

    • 2 years ago
  • saraalmudhaf
    Contest Holder
    • 2 years ago

    This is so far my very best! Thank you.

    • 2 years ago

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