Copy for our Sales and marketing video!

MARKETING VIDEO SCRIPT by SneR85 FIRST 3 PAGES

Hi, I started rewriting and fixing your script, so those are first 3 pages of my idea for your new script. I did not change sentences of importance, I just put more adjectives to make it more attractive to customers. My idea is that the core of your new script stays the same, but with more highlighted key words. I am rewriting your every pasus while reading it and studying it carefully. For now, I managed to write 1 060 words, but I will continue with work. And to point out, that although I am by profession graphic designer, I work as a marketing manager of one company and I am managing their fb page, which now has about 40 000 likes, so I am very familiar with this kind of job. Feel free to tell me what do you think. Kind Regards, SneR85