I require the content for the 'Why Use Us?' section of my website to be rewritten. Specifically, it needs to be much more concise and to have more more impact for an web-based audience/ reader.
Please use the attached draft document for this section as a Guide Only - the objective is to get some high impact writing which is appropriate for the internet.
Note: When this section is completed I am keen to move onto completing content for other sections of my website.