If I am understanding this correctly, what you're trying to get is a team of people who can help revise your book series and turn it into a masterpiece. Is that correct?
I am perfect for this job, because it combines two of my favorite subjects: Young Adult Literature and Magic. Ever since I was little, I've watched TV shows and read comics/graphic novels like Sailor Moon, Magical Girl-themed series, Fantasy themes and the like. I also like Harry Potter, which is a plus.
What makes us great for the job is that we only require a concept, and from that concept we can create a story and during the whole process, we can go back and forth to ensure it meets your needs. We can do an unlimited amount of revisions, and everything we write is 100% unique, copyright free, grammar-checked and mainly yours to do whatever you want to do with!
We have the ability to Skype, although most of our contacts are on Oovoo. Upon accepting us for this job, we will give you our Skype names.
REVISED PARAGRAPH:
Veeloo looked into the sky and saw beautiful orbs of light. The orbs looked like Night Light Drops falling from the sky as if they were snowflakes. Veeloo watched in amazement as everything the drops rested on, illuminated with an outstanding light. As soon as they came, the lights quickly faded away into the darkness.