Greetings! I've attached a short script for my YouTube animation video. As I'm not a native speaker, I need to hire one to proofread this script. Even if you see that a sentence is OK, but people don't say so, feel free to rephrase it. Or if you see that a sentence is complicated and you would like to divide it into several parts, also do it.
The script will be voice-overed, so it has to be comfortable to listen.
The video is going to be in a Kurzgesagt (youtube channel) style and in the same manner (slow pace with beautiful animation etc.)
I hope it will be helpful.
Anyways, I need a creative person who is ready to help me with making an interesting story out of this :)