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  bantomi

  • 10 years ago

  Congratulations Lanangali !

  • 10 years ago
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     lanangali

     • 10 years ago

     thanx my Brother.

     • 10 years ago
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  bibi186

  • 10 years ago

  Yup, congrats to Lanangali and thank you Dzonibu for the best contest. Your demands were specific and precise. It was fun. Thnx!

  • 10 years ago
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     lanangali

     • 10 years ago

     thanx Bibi. Keep the spirit MyBrother

     • 10 years ago
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  Contest Holder

  • 10 years ago

  Congratulations Lanangali !!!

  • 10 years ago
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     lanangali

     • 10 years ago

     thank you for choosing my design. may be useful for your company's success. Thank you so much.

     • 10 years ago
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  Contest Holder

  • 10 years ago

  Dear artist,
  Here is the winner of this contest. This is ….the Lanangali’s work #77 .
  This is my impressions related to this work.
  The work is steady, it resist all the probation. It resist to breakup placed at the high angle to observer’s eye, on one of its main destinations, bicycle down tube, and offers nice, simple and clear outlook. It makes its product recognizable, even from a respectable distance. It keeps its strength, with or without, well balanced outlines and shades and additional design elements.
  The work is a bit “flowery” and it is not unite with equally good looking sign (iconic part) ,which means it certainly needs some “polishing”, but since like this it offers variety of usability options.

  • 10 years ago
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  Contest Holder

  • 10 years ago

  Day 8
  
  Dear artist,
  There are only two days left.I think I am about to announce the winner before predicted time.
  
  There are no new competitors adding work, so for now situation is clear.If noting new happens today that would be it. I don’t know are you going to be able to see the winner’s work, since this is sealed contest, but I promise I would explain my decision.
  
  I would only like to say I enjoyed working with you all these days. It was my privilege, working on this, all over the world crowd sourcing project, and I want to thank you for the honor that you made me with your presence.

  • 10 years ago
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  bibi186

  • 10 years ago

  Hello dear contestholder. Please check #106, #107, #108.

  • 10 years ago
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     Contest Holder

     • 10 years ago

     Your iconic part doesn't seems to have any visual connections to logo name.It didn't convinced me, I am not sure what it represents.

     • 10 years ago
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     bibi186

     • 10 years ago

     thanks for the feedback!

     • 10 years ago
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  Contest Holder

  • 10 years ago

  Day 7
  Dear artist,
  There are only three days left. So far we have two mature works. It is going to be interesting whether someone else will joint this club.
  As of today, I will start to reject all the works that, in my opinion, didn’t succeeded to find “that look”.
  I have tried to help, but this isnt some classes for industrial design and I am not some teacher either.
  I say industrial design because you have to keep in mind where it should be placed.What are limitations with respect to visibility and proportions , angles and etc.. It should be placed on bicycle tube, and not on some brochure or any advertising material.

  • 10 years ago
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  Contest Holder

  • 10 years ago

  #104
  Design looks very nice very professional.

  • 10 years ago
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  Contest Holder

  • 10 years ago

  Day 6
  Dear artist,
  Today is a Sunday so I am little late.I am glad to see you didn’t give up. I glad to see that you are not here only for the money. There can be only one, so stay tuned.
  Some of you have started to come up with fresh new designs and that’s what we need. Don't rush into solution. Do some research, look up for other professionals work, come up with your ideas, not theirs.
  You have all the guide lines you need, pls check for my previous comments on yours and others designs.

  • 10 years ago
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     MonkeyGraphics1

     • 10 years ago

     plz Check #103

     • 10 years ago
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     Contest Holder

     • 10 years ago

     #103 ,
     I think it has too many details on sign(iconic) part(tree pcs) .Pls decide which one is the representation.They don't have any visual connections to your letter part. All of those three I have provided for you as example, using it you disqualify your work.

     • 10 years ago
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  jyuss77

  • 10 years ago

  #100 please... thank you sir.

  • 10 years ago
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     Contest Holder

     • 10 years ago

     #100,
     
     Look up for a famous brand bicycle file in attachment. Your design should look like. this. As soon as you find "that look" come up with your solution. I cant work with you ,as I have said to your colleague just minute before, I need your ideas and you dont need mine

     • 10 years ago
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  branislavad

  • 10 years ago

  please check #101
  thanks

  • 10 years ago
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     Contest Holder

     • 10 years ago

     # 101,
     I am sorry but same as last one.

     • 10 years ago
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  kazierfan

  • 10 years ago

  Please have a look at #99 (Changes possible)
  Fixed the R, keep the slope as you said. Waiting for your further suggestions.
  Thanks. :)

  • 10 years ago
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     Contest Holder

     • 10 years ago

     Dear Kazierfan,
     
     It is ok, but I wouldn't like to be giving any more suggestions to you if you don't mind. I am not searching for work of the art, I just need some nice looking design.I need your ideas and you dont need mine.

     • 10 years ago
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  kazierfan

  • 10 years ago

  Please have a look at #95
  What about the sign ?? Is it okay ??
  Thanks. :)

  • 10 years ago
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     kazierfan

     • 10 years ago

     Also check out #96 (Changed the font)
     Thanks. :)

     • 10 years ago
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     Contest Holder

     • 10 years ago

     # 96, I see that font has smoother lines.
     I am not shore does letter R belong to that font. If it is, you may consider using letter P instead, and construct something that suits better. Use it raw (as it is when you type it). Try to find "that look". Pls check comment on jyuss77

     • 10 years ago
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  branislavad

  • 10 years ago

  please check #97
  thanks

  • 10 years ago
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     Contest Holder

     • 10 years ago

     # 97 ,It is not mature.The lines on sign look as they are atrophy bananas, doesn't have that youth freshness.When you draw curved lines they should look natural.
     Since you use Sans-Serif font pls check Fox suspension forks.They use Sans Serif font. There you can get idea about how it should look like.

     • 10 years ago
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  kazierfan

  • 10 years ago

  Please have a look at #95 and #96
  What about the sign ?? Is it okay ??
  Thanks. :)

  • 10 years ago
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  jyuss77

  • 10 years ago

  Please check #94 . Thanks

  • 10 years ago
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     Contest Holder

     • 10 years ago

     # 94 I mean all the lines. Pls use raw font.Your font is very good.
     Usually it is hard to "get that look" on first shot.Before chops and other details, use drag and slope. Two basic operation. Try to find "that look". Take it step by step ,slow and ease. As soon as you find it you can use those tiny decorations, chops etc...but it should look as simple and clean as possible.

     • 10 years ago
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  creatdesignsal

  • 10 years ago

  Can you please provide feedback for the #93, I tried to not use any font at all.

  • 10 years ago
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     Contest Holder

     • 10 years ago

     # 93, I see you have started with font construction.
     I think this in not good approach.You have to be real skill font maker to do so. There are some big names out there ( Frutiger, Bodoni etc..) use their work instead.

     • 10 years ago
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  kazierfan

  • 10 years ago

  Please have a look at #88 and #89 (Changes possible)
  Tried to design as you said
  Thanks :)

  • 10 years ago
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     kazierfan

     • 10 years ago

     Okay sir. I'm on it.
     Thanks. :)

     • 10 years ago
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     kazierfan

     • 10 years ago

     Joined the letters take a look at #95 (Changes possible)
     Thanks. :)

     • 10 years ago
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  kazierfan

  • 10 years ago

  Please have a look at #90 (Hidden arrow between E and X representing motion)
  Thanks. :)

  • 10 years ago
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     Contest Holder

     • 10 years ago

     # 90 and #92 , I see your point. What is unnatural to me is that all letters look as they are cut from some squire boards with cut ages.Our design represent Rotation - Rotex, so we need smooth lines with some "sport spirit". Sport spirit is represented by your sharp edges but where are our smooth lines.

     • 10 years ago
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     Contest Holder

     • 10 years ago

     Sorry about first sentence I made spelling error.I mean to say " squire boards with cut edges."
     One more thing about your letter X, it is not proportional. The leg with right rotation seams not proportional.

     • 10 years ago
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  jyuss77

  • 10 years ago

  Please check my entry #91 , thank you

  • 10 years ago
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     Contest Holder

     • 10 years ago

     # 91, Pls remove all black color. Make it more clean. Look at your design. Is it nice. Are you clear with idea what you are after to. Then focus on slight detail like down corner "chops" you have made for letter R T X. Try to find balance. They are all sharp and letter O is all natural oval. Either add a chop to O too or try to find some another balancing element. All other details like your black could be added in decal design but we are now focused on logo.

     • 10 years ago
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  Contest Holder

  • 10 years ago

  @Bantomi
  I see you have used electric bike for presentation of your logo because of extraordinary big down tube. But for our logo, it is not the case. We use ordinary down tubes.So pls check how your logo suits to normal bicycle. Are you satisfy with that solution.What massage does it deliver to you. Does it tell you anything about quality, or a care that is taken in that product design. Would you consider buying such bike. Those are the question you have to answer with your design

  • 10 years ago
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  Contest Holder

  • 10 years ago

  Day 5
  Dear artist,
  
  After days of struggle, finally you have understood design request and start to deliver some very interesting works. It is going to be hard for me to find best solution.
  
  As for Sign, I assume you don’t have desirable solution yet, so you didn’t trouble much about it. Pls don’t forget it.
  I was wondering, why you only use capital letters for the logo name. The height of all letters should be the same, but now one said it should be all capital. It could be one or more it doesn’t matter. There are some very beautiful small letters, so pls take a shot

  • 10 years ago
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  creatdesignsal

  • 10 years ago

  Hello, Added #79 is it moving in the right direction now?

  • 10 years ago
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     Contest Holder

     • 10 years ago

     Sorry I didnt saw it
     As for #79 I dont know. You have all the elements.Everything is here but, I feel like it is tearing apart. It need something that will unite letters and create some balance.It give me feel like letters "doesn't belong to each other", like you have mixed fonts which you probably did.Mixing fonts is louse job if you are not skilled font maker.
     Now , since you started that way I could only help saying this.You create unite and balance by proportions, which you can achive with same-size same-heigh-width-ratio same angle, same curved line stile.I dont know which one is it but you have to find that element in order to balance your work. Thats why someone could say this is the work of professional and this is not.

     • 10 years ago
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  Contest Holder

  • 10 years ago

  Day 4
  Dear artist,
  
  Here are some news about ongoing contest.
  Yesterday I have started to reject unsuccessful works. This was good, I can tell it now, and you have started to offer some fresh new ideas, instead of your usual logo approach. Unlike usual company logo, bicycle logo has of its own different design requests and some of you have started to realize that.
  Only one solution, till now, has serious sign. So I have uploaded some ideas- “Sign starting point”. For those with rejected ones, pls check “Letter R starting point” and use some interesting starting letters , maybe find some interesting on your own, and try to shape your fresh new design.

  • 10 years ago
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     MonkeyGraphics1

     • 10 years ago

     Check #81 and give us feedback.
     Thank you.

     • 10 years ago
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     Contest Holder

     • 10 years ago

     Sorry but #81 is similar as previous one. It is not suitable for a decal. It looks more like classic logo design for advertising.

     • 10 years ago
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  MonkeyGraphics1

  • 10 years ago

  Hello sir plz check #68.
  Thank you.

  • 10 years ago
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     MonkeyGraphics1

     • 10 years ago

     chk #73 .

     • 10 years ago
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     MonkeyGraphics1

     • 10 years ago

     chk #74 .

     • 10 years ago

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