Rewrite - Compress this article

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Prize: ₹750
Entries Received: 13
Winner: jainap

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https://beautyhealthtips.in/natural-homemade-skin-whitening-face-packs/
This is such lengthy article. Written for the sake of word count. Please do compressed rewrite this without missing its essence. Do make proper structure with proper sub headers.
I prefer shorter paragraphs.
Max word length: 2500 - 3000

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Trusttyper
- 5 years ago
Hello, I've compressed it without missing a thing.That's what you asked,right?
Hope you'll enjoy.
- 5 years ago
isadorapizzo
- 5 years ago
Hey there, I have a question. I am rewriting the article and I can see some problems in it. It disagrees with itself giving tips on how to make the face whiter while it says at the beginning that every skin tone has its beauty. It is a very long article and I would like to know if I can focus on the healthy glowing skin instead of whitening the skin, as I believe no one needs to be white to be beautiful. What do you think?
- 5 years ago
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1. isadorapizzo
  - 5 years ago
  Ok! I am working on it, I think you will like it :)
  - 5 years ago
2. isadorapizzo
  - 5 years ago
  Hey, I've just posted the text, I really hope you'll like it it's the number 9!
  - 5 years ago
darazdelowar
- 5 years ago
Please check #6
- 5 years ago
perfectmarketer
- 5 years ago
i can do this perfectly kindly let me know if interested
- 5 years ago
1. Contest Holder
  - 5 years ago
  go ahead
  - 5 years ago