check best portuguese translation (Brazil)

The task involves reading two versions of an english to portuguese (Brazil)translation (1/2 page of text) and advising on the following - (a) which translator did the best job of translating our story content. Basically we are looking to pick the person who was best at keeping the tone and context for storified pages so they appeal to our audience (kids and families) and maintain the brand and story values including the "fun factor". (b) any feedback or corrections on the translation picked above please see the [[login to view URL]][1] website for reference to the product and audience. Our audience are kids and parents 6-12 years old. Must be fluent in portuguese (Brazil) and english, and have experience translating entertainment content. > ## Deliverables see attached content for checking