Edit Short story (Improve Technique , Style and Come up with a ending)

I am an experienced ghostwriter currently finishing my Certificate in Creative Writing at the University of Toronto Relevant Skills and Experience I've written many stories in all kinds of genres, including romance, fantasy, children's fiction, thriller and adult fiction. Proposed Milestones £150 GBP - .

Hi, I'm Rohan. I can rewrite your entire story to enhance the narrative style and technique. I think the ending is perfect as it is, open ended and hopeful. However, your language needs a LOT of work. Relevant Skills and Experience I'm a skilled writer with a BA in Literature. My stories have been published in various journals, and I've rewritten novels for clients as well. You can check out a sample story in my profile. Proposed Milestones £150 GBP - Complete Rewrite Do you have a deadline?

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I would be truly honored to help enhance your essay. I am a high school and college educator from the USA with considerable experience working with writers from the UK, AU, and Canada. Relevant Skills and Experience I have over 18 years experience as a proofreader, editor, and professional educator. I would appreciate your consideration. Proposed Milestones £48 GBP - at the halfway mark £50 GBP - at the end of the completed task

Hello, I'd be honored to edit your essay for you. It's very compelling and sad and packs an emotional punch. Relevant Skills and Experience I am Native English-speaking proofreader and copy editor who has edited many books, both fiction and non-fiction, in a variety of genres. Proposed Milestones £50 GBP - I will provide a redlined (track changes) version along with a final one. Thanks for your consideration. Regards, Linda Shiffrin

Hi there! I’m Deborah and I loved the punch your very short story delivers! I’d be delighted to edit it for you - and already have an ending in mind. Relevant Skills and Experience My editing skill is based on a combination of a broad view of the entire text and attention to the nitty-gritty details about grammar, style and technique. Proposed Milestones £50 GBP - Edit short story in 2 days using Track Changes

A fascinating story! You kept me on the edge of my seat! I'm an accomplished book and story editor and ghostwriter, and I'd love to work on this with you. Please reach out to chat about details! Relevant Skills and Experience 10+ years professional writer, including: *10+ EDITING BOOKS and ESSAYS; *10+ GHOSTWRITING FICTION and NON-FICTION; *10+ grant-writing; *6+ content writing; *10+ creative writing (erotica, sci-fi). Proposed Milestones £25 GBP - I deliver a first draft of the edited story, with 2-3 ending options. £25 GBP - Incorporating your notes, I deliver 1-2 more drafts as needed, completing a polished manuscript. Just have to give you another compliment, if that's okay? It's a really great story!

Hi. I like your writing style but i would change the part at the beginning where you are full of praise for Amy, I would give more of a hint that you were in a love/hate relationship. Relevant Skills and Experience Also the narrator's assembly speech being negative could be made more dramatic - you are in a dilemma as to whether to say what is expected or burst out with the truth. Proposed Milestones £55 GBP - Help with your story and come up with a feasible ending, Have you read my reviews?

Very interesting style of a story. I don't know why but I imagined the story in flashes as if it is some flashback of a bigger story. I liked it, found mistakes, and I have a couple pieces of advice Relevant Skills and Experience -Been a short writer for 3 years - Been a ghostwriter for 1 year Obtained skills during my work: - creative writing/proofreading Proposed Milestones £111 GBP - I would change the beginning slightly, add more in the middle between plot transition and the end Additional Services Offered £1 GBP - Indeed, we need to discuss your vision and most importantly your feelings about story/characters

Hello and Good day, my name is Daniel. I am a skilled freelance writer with experience in multiple areas of writing niches and Proofreading. I would love to work with you. Please contact me via private message, let me get this done for you. (I can also show you a sample of my work, for your appraisal) Thanks.

How do you envisage the ending to Sarah's story? She contemplated ending her life (when Amy was alice), and you mention the bridge, which suggests to the reader this may have a further part to play. I have my own ideas for an ending, but would like to discuss your ideas too. How many more words do you require? I can see a lot of editing is needed, which is no problem.

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I read the story, I understand what you're saying with it. I will do an edit and offer suggestions to deliver a polished, professional end product you can be proud of. Relevant Skills and Experience I have written several books in this genre and have edited many more. I have been writing and editing for over 20 years. Details of my experience are available at www.iainmclaughlin.co.uk. Proposed Milestones £150 GBP - Final delivery If you have any questions abut my experience, please just ask.

Hi, Hope you doing well today so I have read your project details am sure able to do this for you but have some questions message me for other details. Thanks Relevant Skills and Experience Creative Writing, Editing, Ghostwriting, Proofreading, Research Writing Proposed Milestones £100 GBP - milestone

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I will submit work on time Relevant Skills and Experience Creative work on time

I don't really understand everything because its mostly quotations, but when we do communicate I'm sure you won't regret it when I write.